Update

Currently, I need to reshoot the following shots in order to complete the music video. Once the video is complete I shall conduct a focus group and gain feedback, in order to see which improvements I need to make. The shots to reshoot are:
"You let the animal" mid shot as this was not long enough shot
"Out" Zoom out as the camera died while filming so did not capture
"you run me right of the rails" over shoulder shot to edit out the background as then it appears to be in a school which is not the effect we were hoping for.
Jack drumming with slight pan- again to get rid of the school background.
Missing shots:
"I lost control" mid shot
"I must be crazyyyyy" band long shot side angle
"You got me feeling like im dancing on nails" extreme close up at end to get drummer in background.


As we have been going through this process we have rearranged parts of the story board in order to gain smoother transitions and to take out any parts of the video that did not look right with the editing.


Digipak plans- Front cover: For the cover I shall get the hand with apple and poison dripping down the arm. I will attempt to manipulate this by desaturating the arm and increasing the saturation of the poison to emphasise this effect of danger. I will also try and add a band around the wrist of the arm in order to give off a snake effect and give the impression of Adam and Eve to a further extent. I have chose to use the theme of temptation throughout represented by Adam and Eve as I feel like this strongly relates to rock, as it is seen to be a promiscuous and rebellious genre, which is well represented in this story. To match this idea I am considering the title "Deadly Sins".


Inside cover: For the inside cover I plan to merge the screaming pictures of the lead singer with the "tree of wisdom" in the background to further the idea of Adam and Eve and to market the artist as this is a close up of the artist.

Behind CD: Here I plan to put a picture of the drawn snake behind the CD as it is quite basic, so it does not take attention away from the rest of the album or the CD cover yet it still fits in with the theme of the rest of the album.

Back cover: I plan to use a picture of James using leaning against the tree and use the blank space to write the information.